Friday, February 1, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21

                                    
Performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, should not be allowed in sports. For example, steroids shouldn't be used because it has a negative effects physically and mentally for a PERIOD of time. In addition, it is a TRADITION that professional athletes do not use performance enhancing drugs because the audience will like to see natural strengths and abilities. Lastly, people shouldn't use steroids because it is not fair for those people who competeor play in the event naturally without enhancing drugs.In conclusion, people should not use steroids as a PRIMARY source to become better at something they should  just have a lot of practice.

1 comment:

  1. Hector, you did a good job of using the words in your paragraph!

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